tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749335997170126184.post7425643195968030887..comments2010-11-12T09:00:58.470-08:00Comments on TheyDonTrEallyCareAboutUs_ What's The Truth: Draft into Essay#2 (2.0)Nyashia Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05269680534451937064noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749335997170126184.post-20992022647202730522010-11-04T10:55:21.802-07:002010-11-04T10:55:21.802-07:00That is actually a good question!
I will continue ...That is actually a good question!<br />I will continue to think about this while also weaving my comment into the body of this essay.I will try to make a lot of sense into this draft while also coming up with more ideas and questions of my own.<br />Thanks!Nyashia Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05269680534451937064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749335997170126184.post-38728262027245324052010-11-04T10:26:33.995-07:002010-11-04T10:26:33.995-07:00Interesting - see if you can work the language in ...Interesting - see if you can work the language in your comment into the paragraph - it makes a lot more sense! Do you think King sees a bigger meaning in this coincidence?Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749335997170126184.post-32433770450950409742010-11-04T10:24:46.879-07:002010-11-04T10:24:46.879-07:00Hello Prof. Tanenbaum,
When I bring up the meaning...Hello Prof. Tanenbaum,<br />When I bring up the meaning of coincidental in King's speech on Vietnam, I am explaining that it is fairly a coincidence that during the time of our troops being sent overseas to aid and fight in the war, On this land that we call our holy land and our home; there was an racial war going on between both whites and blacks. It's a coincidence because two things that are fairly similar are happening at the same time.Nyashia Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05269680534451937064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749335997170126184.post-35697111854882053332010-11-02T11:54:24.042-07:002010-11-02T11:54:24.042-07:00Hi Nyashia - This could be a good start - but! be ...Hi Nyashia - This could be a good start - but! be sure to introduce your text to your reader, so we know what you're quoting in your first sentence. Also, in the second, is 'coincidental' what you mean?Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.com